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Until the Façade Comes Down (Free verse) by TLRufener

For some things there are no words There is no way to explain what we feel Nothing we can do to make things better We only desire the past A past that we can no longer achieve We stepped too far beyond that day Everything has changed between us Nothing more can be said As we have already spoken too much I have told you what is in my heart And you have spoken what is in yours You are content on the outside I have erected a grand façade As sturdy as it may appear, it is weak One glance, one whisper, one smile Will send it crashing to the ground You have heard all I can speak But there is so much more to be said Without the strength to speak it We are here in this exact second And we shall stay until the façade comes down

wilco 4-Dec-05/1:31 PM
First off, don't start a poem with "there are no words" and "there is no way to explain how I feel"....If there's no words and there's no way to explain it why did you write it? Better yet, why am I reading it?

This is a love letter, not a poem. It COULD be a poem if you look in there and find the poetry in it.




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