poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis. by SupremeDreamer.

wilco13 Oct 2005

Hey, haven't seen you in a while dreamersupremer.

On the subject of this poem..it's just too damn long and there's just not enough interesting here to necessitate it being that long (I started wishing for Cliff's Notes). It's good and I almst gave a 9 but it needs to be shortended.