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Escape (Free verse) by Heather Dee

Take a moment to close your eyes, Breaking all unwanted ties. Freeing your mind of needless thought, Escaping the battles you have fought. Take a breath in and exhale all pain. Solitude and peace you have to gain. Don’t resist from letting yourself go, A deeper understanding to all you know. Freedom to expand your clarity of mind, Now is much easier you will find

wilco 3-Oct-05/1:25 PM
Try saying it without the restriction of rhyme. As another recent poem states...rhyme is wholly overrated.




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