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Prick (Free verse) by Enkidu

You there, Standing in the rain, Tell me where you're from again. 'Cause all you do Is pace and spout about What this place can do without. Go home then And stop this rant Go live among your awesome aunts Who, You tell me, Hate the rain. Just make sure you do refrain From making fun of where you be 'Cause here your sorry ass ain't free.

wilco 2-Sep-05/11:35 AM
Yep, completely fell apart. The first half is not bad and the second half is awful.




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