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Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't (Haiku) by Bachus

Mtv awards! Everybody, let's watch P. Diddy's smoke screen. Why mom trampolines? That nigger can't sing, dear. Maybe he can dance? Because he is rich, and they feel sorry for him. What a hard knock life! Pray that the white stripes will turn their amps eleven 'till ears bleed Cobain.

Venus 31-Aug-02/1:17 PM
How did I ever miss this little gem from the God of Spilled Wine??? You know, I paid a visit to Bacchus last year in Firenze - Michelangelo's version anyway - my favorite wino right up close and personal! Me-O-My! I was so inspired I drank three bottles of chianti that day (rather than the usual two). Just have the show on in the background right now, a train wreck I can't help but peek at. You make good observations, and hey, at least the show inspired you to write a piece. Thoughts so far: Pink - henna tats all over her body; faux ink - how telling. What's up with the token little white boy on stage with all the brothers, everyone pretending he can dance? The Hives - hey, isn't that Beck singing? Hmm, sure looks like Beck, moves like Beck, oh wait, no, can't be, cuz Beck is Prince, no wait, oh, fuck it, I'm confused... 7/10




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