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The Glass (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

The Glass separates me from life, so I am seeing from a different angle. The Glass makes everything seem sharper and harder and edgier. But that’s what the glass was made for. I have been told in the past that contacts would be so much prettier and would most assuredly bring out all my nice features. But I have also been told in the past that contacts make it all seem real and you can hardly tell they are there they are so comfortable. No. I don’t want it to seem real. I want to feel it. I want it to remind me that if I look out the corner of my eye I can see the true life on the other side of The Glass.

Spekkio 13-Apr-05/7:39 PM
I thought this poem was very nice. Since I'm starting to read your works, it will serve to get me in the poetic mood for the rest of them. Good job; true and rhythmic.




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