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Transposed (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

If I were not a poet Would it be any easier Cupping you to my mouth? Could I, for once, not Fold under you; as I do the same to tame a love From going South, or in. Back to the core of what Sound does to lips, tongue - - Ear-drum, muse -- From bigger states of being Used, then let loose. To change all of it. God is in me, has a name Auto-didactic, versed & lame Slides between columns Of ancient architecture And caricatures of legend With heroes from Forever. Whispers: plays, and lore Sings: hymns, and more than; Say mother, or doppelganger. When it moves, I feel the swallowing of ends, and the manufacturing of origins My tongue sleepwalks with - - Shamans, and reasons to be More than a few consonants, but instead long moans of - - Truth with perfect pauses of pure infinite silence.

horus8 24-Oct-04/11:44 PM
I'm sorry, but did your face just squelch?
Let us review your comment, shall we?
First off: It's not that I dislike your
writing, it's just that it's a dime a dozen.
Second -- It seems to me your apparent hang-up
with me has nothing to do with poetry, but rather
your impressions of who, or what, I might be.
Proving why I hate fucks like yourselve, see, it's
really never about reality, it's always about your fears and insecurities, and your need to prove something, to who, or what?
Only you know, probably father problems surfacing late in life.
If it makes you feel any better, I'm quite sane, rich, fulfilled, and thoroughly enjoying my beautiful family, and artistic endeavors. There's enough room for the booth of us in this great life friend. Although privacy, honor, and respect have taken a backseat to Republican lap snorkling god humpers like yourself, I still feel GOOD.




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