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Through Your Frown (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

Being lonely You want to be someone else Seeing answers You find them in the wrong place Crying out lonely You push tears through your frown Sighing low, low sounds You become a different person Deciding Deciding whether to accomplish Or be blessed with an endless cause Must decide whether to lose or suffer Or be crished with an open heart Physical lieing You find room in popular class Walk, walk, walk You take the open seat they save for you

Stephen Robins 26-Aug-04/5:10 AM
No one cares about your poetry, my comment is the first on any of your work for 6 weeks. Do you get the impression that the we are all getting a little tired of your preconscious, childish ramblings?




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