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Cut (Free verse) by TheVampireLeStan

The pressure builds, So I cut. Negative feelings overwhelming me, So I cut. Stress adds up, So I cut. Good for nothing, So I cut. Need to relieve this burden, So I cut. Better off dead, So I cut. A little too deep this time, I cut. My blood is everywhere, Because I cut. This isn't what I want, But I cut. Dead...Because I cut.

horus8 23-Aug-02/10:58 PM
dead..because i read...FUCK MY eyes....oh jesu..the cad has penised my eyes...drink urine from now on to properly operate your writing vehicle...JESUS FUCKING christ...replace every "cut" with "nun"...to better this skin rash...FUCK HAAAAAAAA!




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