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The Red Basket (Free verse) by pain killer

The lonely lady stood outside the stonewalled cottage plucking damp linen and memories that would never be from a nylon line whilst angry chickens clucked around her feet a childs voice crying in the distance the lady looks around an angry adult admonishing a sharp slap and harsh words heard in the drift over long empty acres then silence the lady turns the linen packed tight in a red plastic basket held close to her breast she steps back slowly towards the door leaving a small embroidered cotton cap on the floor

horus8 2-Jun-04/2:34 PM
You're funny. Let me get this straight; You're mad because I think you're silly for making THE CHICKENS angry? My friend, I will have you know not only does the thought of an actual chicken becoming angry trouble me... but it strikes me as damn comedy! Rooster, certainly, chickens... nah? Try this google horus8 and then google painkiller and then google "angry chickens", and see if you don't surprise yourself too young man, or should I say, lover.




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