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Re-drafting (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

I was alerted that my thesis Made excessive use of the word 'something'. I searched through and counted Something like thirty one instances in the same chapter. So I decided to do something about it And replace them all with something else.

Fraser Allonby Q.C. 21-May-04/7:06 AM
BOY: "Hello, my dear. You look radiant this evening. Can I get you a drink? My name's Nicholas Jones. I won the Melben G. Glasscock Center for Humanities Research Prize in Historical Literary Studies."

GIRL: [Speechless]




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