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Why Me? (Free verse) by Tarquin De La Bog

Why must I, have this different coloured skin? It's always been hard To try to fit in. Why was it me, to be disfigured at birth? Leaving me With a sense of no worth. Why was it me, that daddy chose to beat? And physically love As his special treat. Why do only I, hear voices in my head? They whisper dark mutterings Fuck her, they said So I fucked a woman, in the park She didn't know me It was dark. Why was it me, that somebody saw? Running that night Back to my door. Why was it me, that the cops came to see? Asking awkward questions 'Was it you, nigger?' Maybe. Why was it me, that the cops beat to shit? Kick followed blow Hit after hit. Why is it me, lying in bed? Crippled for life Nearly dead. I've never had friends, what did I do? Shunned by society I am taboo.

Bachus 19-Aug-02/7:30 PM
u know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of
my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your
fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in
the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year
old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no
wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking
rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah
should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think
this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses
economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you
fucking two versed parrot...ha! ----/10




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