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Bread Wine And Chocolate (Haiku) by Caducus
Mouth’s hued brown by eggs Laid from the ass of Judas Pay them, sell out Christ
Up the ladder: The Business of Church
Down the ladder: Radiation Reflections
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1298
Posted: March 30, 2004 5:06 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2004 5:06 AM PST
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[10] SupremeDreamer @ 66.53.166.222 | 30-Mar-04/5:44 AM | Reply
I love this.. it fills me with an uncordial envy, and shame for not having come close to producing such a wicked & mighty haiku.. but worry not, I shall endure and soon enough my vile emotions will pass, beginning my mission to create a haiku to match yours, or atleast bring me closer to my "Golden Haiku from Satan".

Blessed with ten.
[9] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 31-Mar-04/5:34 PM | Reply
A reference to easter?
[n/a] Caducus @ 195.92.168.164 > Shuushin | 1-Apr-04/9:58 AM | Reply
you got it - thanks for reading it
[9] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 > Caducus | 1-Apr-04/10:07 AM | Reply
you forgot the "E" on brown though...
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