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Steve Irwin (Free verse) by Bobjim He won't be beaten,
Till he's eaten.
Up the ladder:
can't take the heat?
Down the ladder:
Kenny G
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Posted: February 4, 2004 1:43 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2004 1:43 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.100853 Overall Rank: 6050 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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4-Feb-04/4:48 AM
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CROIKEY!!111 -10-
I would change the "Till" to "Until".
But that's because I'm a colossal arse. -10-
Since you didn't spot it, I'll point it out to make you feel stupid:
"Till" is completely wrong anyway, it should be "'Til".
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=till
Read it 'n' weep dickface. till2 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (tl) prep. Until. conj. Until. Usage Note: Till and until are generally interchangeable in both writing and speech ... Till is actually the older word, with until having been formed by the addition to it of the prefix un-, meaning âup to.â
What can I say, if it had actually been me that wrote that I might feel stupid. But I didn't, and I don't.
Or barbed through the heart by a stingray.
*A minute's silence at the passing of a legend* 482 view(s)
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