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A Kiss (Other) by devilishnutcase Touching your heart,
Juggling emotions,
Doting desires,
I feel myself start to perspire,
Caressing your skin,
Falling deep within,
Your beauty so breathless,
Leaves my heart into a tattered mess,
My mind wanders,
To a simple task,
Yet all I want to ask,
Is something as simple as this,
Let my lips grace yours with a kiss
Up the ladder:
Leading To Fatality
Down the ladder:
The Corner Tavern
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Posted: January 7, 2004 4:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2004 4:28 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.345782 Overall Rank: 3427 Comments:
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little_big_nose @ 216.207.132.135
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7-Jan-04/6:15 PM
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pretty good, it's a half-rhyme kinda thing...i like it
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips...
Compact and honest. 166 view(s)
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