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A Different Point of View (Pimple) by Blindpoetry Sitting here by myself
While you infiltrate someone else
You stabbed the knife in my back
I was just another one of your toys on the rack
I was blinded by your beauty
I could not see the way you mistreated me
I wish you would go away
You still flirt with me to this day
Even after you drove that nail in my foot
After I put
My trust into you
My inner beauty to you
My heart into you
You ripped my heart into shreds ; it now bleeds
The blood coming from my heart feeds
My anger ; getting stronger
Towards you...
Up the ladder:
Careless Sneezes
Down the ladder:
Kerri & Terri
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: January 5, 2004 6:15 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2004 6:15 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6717 Comments:
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little_big_nose @ 216.207.132.65
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5-Jan-04/6:22 PM
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pretty much yea, all women do that
The bit about the nail in the foot is very funny and deserves 10/10; but the rest is pretty dire.
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