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i don't recall the last 8 minutes (Other) by tralala42001 constant and constantly
and even more so an
uneasy mind and soft
eyes that scream random laughs
in the air that respond to
uncertain state of minds
and then the blotches of
red ink run and the pillows
became damp and the
blankets are rough on
the skin that sees
through the sheets
of green hills with
flowers stemming
from the ground
above my
tomb
Up the ladder:
wibble wibble honk
Down the ladder:
Couplet
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Posted: January 3, 2004 4:19 PM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2004 4:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6479 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 129.82.152.112
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1-Feb-07/7:52 PM
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the first two lines are kind of useless. However, it winds down well.
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