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Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
Silence and cobwebs simple designs yet- I think jesus is caught in one of those kicking with his free foot blood screams escape his lips. Forgive the spider, and get yourself a GT 500 Glider with power brakes, and for heaven sakes, drink that divine wine. Droplets fall to my floor, its nice to have some color been having grey visions for much to long folks, and now red hindu dots are a fad. Today the pope cried, said so much for religion, our saviour had a head on collision with inevitability. Chuckle and smile its a funny sight to see gods son wrapped like a mummy when the bastard ain't Egyptian. Will they build him a pyramid, or bury him like common folk? Was he man or god? Who knows, another interesting character in the big book called the bible, awarded the Incest Award along with the Squished Eye Medal. Fools, couldn't eat a metaphor nevermind a book filled with em. Only the strong survive, and thank god for that- or wait, isn't that evolutionism? Praise Darwin! He had the GT 500 Glider with self-implemented super power brakes.

Up the ladder: A Dear John
Down the ladder: a wonderful life

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5659
Posted: October 27, 2003 2:07 AM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 2:07 AM PST
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[7] Bobjim @ 213.122.108.80 | 27-Oct-03/12:14 PM | Reply
What an interesting poem. Did you know that Jesus was actually a spider?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.178.125 > Bobjim | 27-Oct-03/4:07 PM | Reply
check out: Gods Musician: Grave Digger

Yes.. but i called him a wolf back then, but of course, both have fangs and enjoy blood. :)
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 27-Oct-03/3:45 PM | Reply
What's the contraction for "Ain't" Ainot? That's what I like about you. You're a loose canon. And personaly? Incest rocks.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.178.125 > horus8 | 27-Oct-03/4:12 PM | Reply
I like explosions, thats all, its like listening to drums at punk rock shows.

Nothing against incest- im guilty and my cousin will never admit it, but it sure wasnt to keep the family blood pure.

And I got me own Squished Eye Medal, but you know that ofcourse, and i still got some of the juice from the squelching.
[7] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 | 27-Oct-03/5:05 PM | Reply
Neato.
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