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She wishes (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
She wishes his penis a little shorter and his tongue a little longer.

Up the ladder: I Usually Wear Pants
Down the ladder: Dust

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5454545
Weighted score: 6.5176578
Overall Rank: 675
Posted: October 11, 2003 6:48 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2003 6:48 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 12-Oct-03/8:37 AM | Reply
I read this with pain. 8.
[1] peaceseeker @ 24.97.224.6 | 12-Oct-03/9:52 AM | Reply
obviously he doesn't know how to use either one.
[9] deleted user @ 66.190.211.137 | 12-Oct-03/2:54 PM | Reply
I think this is super super funny. LOL Full 9
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 30-Oct-03/10:15 AM | Reply
Where did all your poems go?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 1-Nov-03/6:07 AM | Reply
I made the big-eyes-and stick-your-tongue-out, face and they ran away. weeping. weeping. I feel inferior sometimes and then I get frustrated and yank them. All my scores were average. I saw no need to keep writing average poetry. Poemranker is the worst kind of addiction.
[9] eyrbare @ 64.33.190.24 | 18-Nov-03/8:01 PM | Reply
Superb short (poem, that is)!
[1] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* @ 65.95.30.115 | 9-Feb-05/5:07 PM | Reply
ok than
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