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Pendulum swing lines (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Distancefriend, who has entered my room in a chilled breeze through my window, here is a clock. It is round and flat and incon- sequential. Let us toss it to and fro, like a frisbee. What time do we have? The time we spend. Cycles, finite and infinite. The way a tree grows, flourishes, and dies. Then becomes paper, or a house, or fire. Invisible lightning strikes at random, and I have caught many bolts, and you.

Up the ladder: Bad Timing
Down the ladder: Definition of Hypocrisy

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2730
Posted: June 15, 2003 8:08 AM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 8:08 AM PDT
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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 15-Jun-03/11:31 AM | Reply
I think "Distant friend,". Other than that, Fairly nice. -7-
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.7 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 15-Jun-03/12:22 PM | Reply
normally,yes. this was intentional. Danka.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jun-03/12:07 PM | Reply
Flattering
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.7 > horus8 | 15-Jun-03/12:21 PM | Reply
you're gonna make me work, aren't you?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.7 > horus8 | 15-Jun-03/12:29 PM | Reply
or is it fluttering, like toilet paper grabbing for it's last rim of hope?
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