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Calm As Confusion (Lyric) by Miggy
Eyes keep on surrounding Stress giving me a pounding Lost all respect from everyone As fast as setting off a gun Thrown around like faded news Working hard with no tribute to Once a favorite, now all alone Nowhere in sight of where to go (Chorus) Never a solution, only the cause As pressure increase, so do the flaws Thoughts run around though my head Not clearly better then you once said Sadness the first to reach the surface Was only the one not wanting the perfect People find me lost as a shadow No soul inside and pride so low An excuse for losing it all, Running away while taking a fall That there was something else I want What my mind has found to haunt (Chorus) (Bridge) Seeing a reflection of myself Just wanted someone for help The wounds that made me strand From the life I knew I had (Chorus/End)

Down the ladder: End

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1875
Weighted score: 6.9267435
Overall Rank: 194
Posted: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT
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[0] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 2-Aug-05/12:17 AM | Reply
Â¥ou should be stapled to a cucumber and lukewarmed.
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