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my so called life (Free verse) by nolan
seperate yourself from their ignorance keep you hands close but your thoughts closer don't look, don't break down you are all you need wake up to noone make your own coffee the way you like it not the way the label tells you draw a picture for noone except yourself when someone asks if they can have it tell them no, and then smile walk up your stairs stopping on the first and fourth look out your window at the house across the street look and look until you see your eyes in the reflection of your window cry, cry because you are happy when the tears dry, wash your face you cannot paint over tears put on your mask, you are not real and start another day in your so called "life"

Up the ladder: Not Titled
Down the ladder: Fire roses

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10639
Posted: April 26, 2003 2:21 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2003 2:21 PM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Apr-03/3:29 PM | Reply
Whatever Corky.
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