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Beggar's Indulgence (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. Asleep on the bench -
Once proud beard, now laced with chives.
Has he been feasting?
Up the ladder:
Spuna
Down the ladder:
Insomnia
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Posted: February 17, 2003 8:35 AM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 8:35 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.666461 Overall Rank: 545 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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17-Feb-03/11:14 AM
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You can thank me for the ten in person, with chives.
brrrrrrrrill.
Perfect, again.
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
Chives are the very lifeblood of the tramp! To offer chives to a tramp is the utmost folly... Would you offer fuel to a fire? Yes, yes, I suppose you would. Then go, go into the chives lounge with my blessings, and return with an armful of aromatic deformity, and spread it on all who will be spread 'pon.
nice.
ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
Amusing 10.
This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
go figure
Where did you see my Father we miss him terribly?
DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
This haiku made me hungry. Jelouse of the satisfied man on the beach.
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