Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Homemade Greetings (Free verse) by jessicazee
I am cutting faces from magazines. A model's eye The ear of a victim Two lips from a known liar. Gluesticking features to blank notecards. Captains of soccer teams can send Dada greetings to their fresh cousins. Why make cards except to boost One's own boastfulness, An oaf no more, but never an artist. Teabag stencils and pressed pansies A mark of spit and fingerprint From my post to your whacked-down box.

Up the ladder: Brethren
Down the ladder: Pages

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 20
.. 20
.. 10
.. 00
.. 10
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 7.125
Weighted score: 5.5715003
Overall Rank: 2415
Posted: October 15, 2002 1:29 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2002 1:29 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 16-Oct-02/2:42 AM | Reply
Harsh to all card makers! I have never before considered the ethics of greeting cards - this is sharp.
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Oct-02/8:07 AM | Reply
swell. biting.
[9] god'swife @ 209.178.176.99 | 16-Oct-02/8:43 AM | Reply
Fanfuckintastic. I am clicking print.
[n/a] jessicazee @ 205.188.208.42 > god'swife | 18-Oct-02/12:23 AM | Reply
ooh I'm glad you like my stuff.
i think you're (god's wife) one of the besties here.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Nov-02/3:50 PM | Reply
Golden Q-tip award un shouted..10.
226 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001