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Operation: Nielsens (Haiku) by bondjedi
attack on Iraq tonight, after "Survivor" no way to make war

Up the ladder: Sunflowers for Natalie
Down the ladder: boom

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12810
Posted: September 18, 2002 2:02 AM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 2:02 AM PDT
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[8] god'swife @ 209.179.212.41 | 18-Sep-02/6:31 PM | Reply
I love this kind of untouched snapshot, although the last line doesn't quite finish the set up of the 1st 2.
[8] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 18-Sep-02/9:59 PM | Reply
dead on
[n/a] royalflesh @ 67.115.84.106 | 18-Sep-02/10:03 PM | Reply
Smile - ever beautiful, in the heat of summer...zzinia is still alive..(wink) Your still on my shelf, bright; lighting; comforting these eyes.
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