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A Cyclamatic Word of Advice (Free verse) by Skamper ask another stupid question
yes there is such a thing
it's here now
resplendant
on your tongue
stop telling me it's natural
as if the bleeding
and the breathing
are
one and the same
you missed
the right to sympathize
in the alphabetical shuffle
of
sexual determination
just pass me a:
towel
smoke
paracetemol
and leave me to:
dry
sleep
self indulge
at this moment you are denied
existence
in any station other than
servitude
'til the healing
when I'll forgive you
Up the ladder:
buk has a piss
Down the ladder:
Best left unsaid (trust first instincts edit, w/thanks)
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Posted: November 19, 2007 8:45 PM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2007 1:10 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.566214 Overall Rank: 2437 Comments:
This reminds me of one I wrote where a woman gives back an engagement ring. And his rib.
point me in the direction - or repost, would like to read that.
Great stuff skamper--the first stanza really sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Nice work.
thanks Paul - I have been toying with writing something like this for a while
I would hate to be the one on the other end of THAT laser. Hey is this website in the UK?
lol...stay well clear when the signs present... I think this is a US site, not sure tho
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This is really good Skamper. Not sure about that -maybe-.
relying way too much on images to speak for you - isn't that what we do, draw the image in words?