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Forbidden Time (Free verse) by sonawrote
Wish I knew where this was going Began the journey fully knowing Hearts get broken, lives get torn Pierced myself on a roses thorn Soft like petals, smells so sweet A place to go, to hide, retreat Lustful whispers, aching arms Eating up the questioned charms Wanting to be weak, to make you stronger Wanting this moment .... a little bit longer Escape into the dark of night Pass on the reality fright Why this way, why not forever Came so close, in this endeavor Seems to be, some ways a taunt Was almost exactly what I want But I'm not yours, and you're not mine Our time is such a moralistic crime But for a moment, the world spins round Lost for a moment in what we found Invisible sanctuary, that you can't see The way your eyes look into me Healing wounds inside my soul Broken pieces, restored whole

Up the ladder: how much do i love you
Down the ladder: If A Goat

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11525
Posted: September 20, 2007 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2007 6:29 PM PDT
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