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Lustlets of longing (Free verse) by bharat shekhar
Little spurting stress busters, leaking tributaries without a source- ride up up up the tip of craving, carve courses down carnal valley- water sports, wet weather reports, tie ups in dungeons and forts. Thus desire dribbles on paper. He crumples the now limp appendage, back inside his lonely pyjamas.

Up the ladder: Scapegoat
Down the ladder: Heirophant

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6303
Posted: April 29, 2007 1:39 AM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2007 1:39 AM PDT
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[7] half.italian @ 76.172.249.205 | 5-May-07/11:18 AM | Reply
Delicious.
[6] pete @ 62.56.114.137 | 7-May-07/4:32 PM | Reply
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
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