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Lost In It (Free verse) by PoeticXTC
Surrounded at every end No windows to breath No doors to leave. Or Is it that I don't want to Living a life of despair and regret The only way out is up. Living a life for where there is no life Everything in life is corrupt. Is it just me, or is fate calling. This life is no luck, it's a disgrace Sit back to wonder what's to be dealt next There is too little space misplaced. In one's heart truths will be held. Your truths, my truths, all truths are consealed There is no space for disgrace No time for regret No need to despair There is hope in a heart and love will prevail.

Up the ladder: For My Muse
Down the ladder: Passion

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10690
Posted: December 10, 2006 7:37 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2006 7:37 PM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 208.127.72.158 | 13-Dec-06/9:38 PM | Reply
Way too non-directional and unclear. I think you need definite statements, not wishy-washy expressions.
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