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OI! The Brown Flame (Other) by SupremeDreamer eeek. Oi. I have
shat myself silly.
pour kerosene over me, lite me up
perhaps then I shan't be so damn
SMELLY!!
ah.. my rectal drip has returned.
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Posted: November 29, 2006 10:53 AM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2006 10:53 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.6125903 Overall Rank: 12463 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 75.35.231.137
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29-Nov-06/10:53 AM
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Boredome and Ignorance. Alas I'm held captive.
You need an extra exclamation mark in line 5.
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
Fucking awful
'Twas the point you twat. Atleast I don't vote for meself, missy.
The rectal bit was good.
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