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Well enough, first verse. (Lyric) by Enkidu
I am a soul that's been sold to Satan And I am a part of your imagination But could you be wrong about me When there are some things that are so hard to see. I am the slimmest chance in the world And will you be my forgotten girl I can't even tell if we're aimed for hell and we aren't the the first damned lovers who fell. It's crime To be sure What is the destiny your looking for. I I know you well Well enough.

Up the ladder: Is She Worth It?
Down the ladder: Another Chapter

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9956
Posted: November 19, 2006 1:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2006 1:00 PM PST
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