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That Shade (Free verse) by Enkidu
That shade of white The flag that flies outside your door Surrender? Why fly it then? The chimney smoke extinguishes In the opaque sky And it's white, still Wind-blown waves of future war Bending to forever-mores That sickly shade of white Turning shadows from the moon

Up the ladder: Questions
Down the ladder: Solitary Being

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8879
Posted: July 9, 2006 9:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2006 9:15 PM PDT
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[8] Zoe @ 84.13.3.103 | 10-Jul-06/4:13 AM | Reply
Nice Oriental sounding poem.
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