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Doctoring Stigmata (Pimple) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I could play word games And sell you on such things As dreams of sky sailing To look you in the eyes If names mean anything Then you can call me doctor As I treat the wounded salvation Sometimes I play these games Counting up the battles To add up the odds and ends Of how these things occur Strange situations and well placed cynicism Tonight I'm a ringer Playing the roll of gun slinger Sometimes I think that Wilde was right Every man does kill the thing he loves So tonight I'm gunning down wishful thinking Because we all know nothing makes my heart beat faster Than running straight after, a brush with disaster Wanting most what I can not have Mainly because I can not have it There is something to the thrill of the chase The way the blood runs quick in a life or death race I know better than reaching across oceans Yet something in me aches for adventure To save the poet's soul from dying I must kill my muse again and again and again The game must end, it must end, end, and end again, and again I've always had a thing For dangerous damsels Dark haired stunners With heart break severe Now I fight with the mirror, Screaming insults at myself For failed attempts at thinking That age lent wisdom

Up the ladder: Empty Chronicles
Down the ladder: He Kissed Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4686
Posted: June 28, 2006 1:22 AM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2006 1:22 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] CherokeeRoseLoggins @ 71.31.231.183 | 29-Jun-06/12:02 AM | Reply
A good poetry prose, and a good concept. The construction and verse is very well done.
[8] ecargo @ 63.22.18.184 | 2-Jul-06/12:21 PM | Reply
I really like this, bunny--it's got heart and honesty. Moves along well too--I like the gunslinger image, it fits the hankering after adventure and romance; you could have taken it even further, I think (maybe that's another poem).
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