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Spongey Disease (Lyric) by lukehanney
There’s a spongy disease that’s a comin’-a round Spreads through the air lies in the ground It travels through your conscience, up around your head Screws you up inside and leaves you hanging on a thread It travels through your veins, makes your blood heat up and boil Pumps out through your heart and twists your spine into a coil Fires up your jugular and turns you bad an’ mean Fuels a spark of raging anger into a bloody fire unseen It makes you feel your friends and foes are out to drag you down Turns a bright acceptant face, into a vengeful scheming frown It eats you inside out till you’re left a screaming wreck Takes you by your scruff and wrings the skin around your neck

Up the ladder: Youth
Down the ladder: Falling Asleep

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.9640274
Overall Rank: 131
Posted: June 19, 2006 4:59 PM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2006 4:59 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Ranger @ 86.131.55.53 | 22-Jun-06/4:23 AM | Reply
I think this poem is about theological discussions on the four horsemens' forums. They certainly leave me that way. Tip-top and tickety-boo.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.48 | 5-Aug-08/8:36 AM | Reply
This seemed to run out of steam a bit part way through. Like a fart in a thunderstorm.
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