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Dreams (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi Take a glance at peace.
Quiet, calm, and harmless.
How lovely it is.
Now take a look at our world.
Death, shouts, and frightening.
The vision of war.
All the peace had vanished,
only left with grim and evil.
Can you imagine the world
turn into a frightful globe?
So lets begin our dreams.
Our hope and peace.
Let Earth be the most wonderful
place to be.
Up the ladder:
Cookies Won't Cut It
Down the ladder:
Storm Damage
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Posted: June 7, 2005 8:01 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2005 8:01 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7065 Comments:
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lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244
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7-Jun-05/8:02 PM
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Hopefully this poem wont cause another "discussion" again. Anyways, I dont really think the title is suitable for the poem so I need some ideas. Thanks~
Perhaps consider 'Peace And War'? And what kind of "discussion" are you talking about? By the way, this is like another one of your successful masterpieces. Nice.
Thanks for providing ideas. Greatly appreciated.
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
Thankz. The answer to your idea of a title would be no. I just dont thing it's suitable. Thx anywayz.
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