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Silent (Free verse) by storyspinner
The words I don’t say Come between us Slipping from my mouth Hovering in the air Sliding over skin – Soft, slick, and sweet I say I need your help What I mean is I need your touch The feel of your breath The slither of your tongue What I mean is The words I don’t say Come alive Twining around your throat Sliding through your hair A joy that I – forever mute May never have I want to scream HOLD ME And I want you To scream my name My skin trembles With the smallest whisper Of your voice I've begged you Hear me The words I don’t say Are unnecessary I’ve told you a thousand times The slide of my fingers On your wrist My breath on your neck Today, you listened To The words I don’t say

Up the ladder: A sponatious free write
Down the ladder: since i found my own woman

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5922
Posted: April 14, 2005 6:16 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 6:16 PM PDT
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[10] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 16-Apr-05/1:28 PM | Reply
If I knew this was written by someone who could not speak, Id say it's sensual and meaningful to a reader who can. If I didn't know that I'd say the same.
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