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Dancing (Free verse) by not_a_philosopher
Dancing dancing through out life dancing up the stairs dancing my way back down Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to you dancing my way away Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to hate (kicking him in the balls) dancing my way away Dancing

Up the ladder: Inspire Me
Down the ladder: Valentine?

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12334
Posted: April 14, 2005 2:28 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 2:28 PM PDT
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[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.230 | 15-Apr-05/10:19 AM | Reply
Looks like a textbook example from chem. 101, and almost as boring. "(kicking him in the balls)" is the only saving grace. -6-
[2] Christof @ 62.121.23.56 | 16-Apr-05/4:44 AM | Reply
Not a philosopher.

Or a poet.
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