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Amphetamine Witches & Scrabble (Free verse) by Bachus
I begin with a six letter word for paradise You three letter off of the 'H' a garden utensil I, bored, glass-pipe -- Flipping through Satan books Written by uneducated new-age-hacks (Like about 80% of the idiots reading this - - Currently, because of the intriguing title.) From beer to wine to joint, no point I have a sore throat, but still manage to Suck down the table Out of sheer momentum and loyalty To the form -- I might just face first My own dick tonight -- power yoga. I'm writing this left handed, witch One eye on my cocktail, the other in Some other window, user-naming Just another password in a long line Of breached slang and tipped over - - Columns of bad skin and fire. In the end I'll win by 27 points, 33 degrees from the coldest solstice. And after foil-flash, broken bottles, and DUI Maybe you'll use that broom to sweep out - - Your brain, and while you're at it, pick up A six pack for a re-match, and a splash of cocaine Shh...The television set is telling me some really Interesting shit about natural disasters. (fill in the missing line).

Up the ladder: To MY Mother
Down the ladder: Feminist?

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.444445
Weighted score: 6.7222223
Overall Rank: 491
Posted: March 2, 2005 3:03 PM PST; Last modified: March 2, 2005 3:03 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] nentwined @ 64.60.192.130 | 2-Mar-05/4:24 PM | Reply
This is a lot of fun.
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.203.220 | 2-Mar-05/5:49 PM | Reply
..."in the paddleboat of our endless love"
[9] jessicazee @ 205.188.116.135 | 3-Mar-05/1:06 AM | Reply
Scrap the first stanza, albeit with my fair regards- the rest I be liking. 8.9
[9] Dovina @ 12.72.4.218 | 3-Mar-05/7:06 AM | Reply
I like the audiance sarcasm in the first verse - a funny twist.
[10] darby pyn @ 207.200.116.130 | 7-Jun-05/4:20 PM | Reply
I love this poem, rant. you have great sarcasm.
[10] SupremeDreamer @ 69.236.68.172 | 28-Dec-07/11:33 PM | Reply
Debased soul in the devine body of
methylated illusion.
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