Lindsey,
Here's some advice that will allow you to continue posting here and getting all sorts of advice, most of it bad. When you post a poem, never delete it as you did with your first one. If you do delete it, never replace it with a poem of the same title, as you did with your second. That just makes us think you deleted our comments because you didn't appreciate them. The best you can expect here is a few honest comments. Most are guff from the regulars who like to play around and have no intention of helping anyone. Hope you find this useful.
Dovina
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