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Ah ha ah ha (Concrete) by -=Tan_Hand=-

Stood in line In the rain Got very wet My turn came No food left

DrinkYouAway 29-Apr-04/5:42 PM
Wow, very strong, very intimidating. This isnt what I was expecting at all. This is either from the perspective of a poor, or homeless man/woman/child. Intense, short and to the point. i give it a 10




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