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The Negro (Free verse) by Everyone

He toils; Gnarled hands grope the tilth, Baked-black hide caked in filth: He's soiled. He bolts; O'er the fence, thro' Master's grounds, Straight into the waiting hounds: He halts. He wails; Bulging lips swell with rage, Thrashing limbs to break his cage: He fails. He stoops; White palms clenched about the bars, As Master's whip inflicts new scars: He droops. He toils; Gnarled hands grope the tilth, Baked-black hide caked in filth: He's soiled.

DrinkYouAway 29-Apr-04/5:40 PM
Wow, Very Very Very intense, strong wording. I really loved the way you wrote this, its so dark, and horrible. Great write




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