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Horses (Ghazal) by ggawrysi

1. Its muscled body glistening with sweat The cool ocean mist makes its body wet. 2. A mare whinnies, she's frantically worried Her pony is gone, she searches hurried. 3. Spurring his horse, the cowboy speeds along His ride is his pride and the mustang strides long. 4. Have you ever heard of a Lippizaner Stallion Born black, turns white, rode the Spanish galleon?

ggawrysi 28-Apr-04/10:51 PM
I guess that I did it to show separation of the two line poems for those who do not know what a ghazal is.




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