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Diary entry (edit) (Free verse) by richa

The omens gather like clouds: A hefty wood pigeon lands on a maple, upsets the grin of a wet leaf, rain falls on my head-- she is beautiful the butterfly claps, earth puts forth its crooked mirror.

hypatia 28-Apr-04/1:50 PM
Since you told us the wood is the habitat, I'll believe you, but woud not have thought of it that way. Otherwise, I like it much.




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