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Herman (Free verse) by richa

Like the fern burnt by frost planted in north's shade is the hermit. A strange alphabet of runes and figures played out has left him left out. But we feel no sadness, we are bees at a honeypot; he has no sweet tooth.

ggawrysi 28-Apr-04/12:07 PM
all my critiques were previously stated by others. i will simply state that i enjoyed it.




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