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Herman (Free verse) by richa

Like the fern burnt by frost planted in north's shade is the hermit. A strange alphabet of runes and figures played out has left him left out. But we feel no sadness, we are bees at a honeypot; he has no sweet tooth.

hypatia 27-Apr-04/10:47 AM
I like this a lot, but would leave out "runes and"
The fern also is bothersome because all ferns do best in north shade and all are burned by frost if one is.




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