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Quintus: Lesson 1 (Other) by richa

His mind withdraws, like the tongue, too far back to swallow the water of a lake, green as moss. 'What colour would you prefer, you must drink' says the tutor. 'Make it the pale blue I know as water' 'but pale blue is the sky; the green is the eye of the sycamore that looks down on your lake. Drink, for you can see the fishes.'

hypatia 22-Apr-04/11:52 AM
This may be the first time I think I understand a poem of yours.
The lesson of the tutor is repugnant green.
The student wants cushy blue.
But the icky green is just a reflection from the sycamore.
But what are the fishes - reflections of sycamore leaves, maybe.
All sorts of nice implications here.
Love it.




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