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#20 (Haiku) by mikejedw

The breeze creeps with feet blistered by the now-dead frost, dampened on new grass.

irishfolksuicide 20-Apr-04/9:24 AM
the, with, by, the, on. Five syllables gone saying nothing, that is a whole line.




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