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Diary entry (edit) (Free verse) by richa

The omens gather like clouds: A hefty wood pigeon lands on a maple, upsets the grin of a wet leaf, rain falls on my head-- she is beautiful the butterfly claps, earth puts forth its crooked mirror.

zodiac 13-Apr-04/7:12 AM
Much better. But with the new, longer footnote you need to find another way to set it apart, methinks.




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