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On the Theme of Melted Pianos (Free verse) by embersandenvelopes

When the pianos melt and drip like wet and lanquid sugar; It is the simplicity of the sound now emerging as words now housing lips that were also once dreams that is the first shiver of sweet caress to show you that through selected death there is always the trancendence of rebirth.

Shuushin 10-Apr-04/8:13 PM
not too shabby.

your mission: delete seven words.




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