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ReplyTo a comment on ritual of now intensified by nentwined.

nentwined8 Apr 2004

the first line long is the long and slow press of the plunger.

hello :)

the first line seems cliche out loud. but perhaps not--it requires the right intonation. Perhaps I have it, now.

I do not like slams.

But perhaps a 'reading'. Do non-slam readings happen in places, in a periodic fashion? I do like reading my poems.

Perhaps I should record them--I did that a long time ago.

Oh yes, I hate my voice.

Right. :)