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ritual of now intensified (Free verse) by nentwined

I press the plunger of the press slowly, separating grounds from water, earth from mana, and the act (ritual) breathes the essence of coffee-to-be into my mind, a mystical hypodermic mainlined to my soul; memories of russet-brown nectar taste themselves into my mouth, the cup held to my face, and warmth tingles up my nose and explodes in full-fledged recollection of the joy I am about to experience; and then-- it is.

nentwined 8-Apr-04/5:26 PM
the first line long is the long and slow press of the plunger.

hello :)

the first line seems cliche out loud. but perhaps not--it requires the right intonation. Perhaps I have it, now.

I do not like slams.

But perhaps a 'reading'. Do non-slam readings happen in places, in a periodic fashion? I do like reading my poems.

Perhaps I should record them--I did that a long time ago.

Oh yes, I hate my voice.

Right. :)




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